11.23.2014

some words on a page

I want to give you
something I’ve made

some words on a page—as if
to say 'Here are some blue beads’

or, 'Here's a bright red leaf I found on
the sidewalk” (because

to find is to choose, and choice
is made).

—Denise Levertov, “The Rights,” Here & Now (1957), reprinted in the Collected Earlier Poems 1940–1960 (New Directions, 1979)

11.22.2014

eternal question

To explore the tradition or to try to explode it?

11.20.2014

cross purposes

A poem that insists on translation even as it resists one at every turn.

11.18.2014

utterance not to be undone

The line that is a lie. Yet resists strikethrough utterly.

11.17.2014

singular event

That point in composing when you know no poem is going to be like this one.

11.16.2014

spare change

The poet always has one more word in his pocket.

11.14.2014

time and the visible

Painting is the art which reminds us that time and the visible come into being together, as a pair. The place of their coming into being is the human mind, which can coordinate events into a time sequence and appearances into a world seen. With this coming into being of time and the visible, a dialogue between presence and absence begins. We all live this dialogue.

—John Berger, The Success and Failure of Picasso (Vintage, 1993)

11.12.2014

type parameter

Bad typography can damage the text, but good/fancy typography cannot appreciably improve it.

11.11.2014

well behaved

Perhaps the poem was too polite.

11.09.2014

novel idea

Somehow early on the aphorist realized a novel was out of the question.

11.08.2014

new poetry

To go back to that time when one was discovering a new passage, a new poet, almost every day.

11.07.2014

landscape and weather

By 1969 Richard Hugo had completed his third and even his fourth book of poems. As we must expect, it is the Northwest poems which conduct Hugo’s trial by landscape, his arraignment by weather, to a further pitch of excruciation: the menace of place is acknowledged to correspond to destructive energies in the self….

—Richard Howard, “Richard Hugo: Why Track Down Unity When The Diffuse Is So Exacting?,” Alone With America: Essays on the Art of Poetry in the United States Since 1950 (Atheneum, 1980)

11.06.2014

part of the whole

A good political poem manages to make the specific events that provoked it part of an ongoing universal struggle.

11.05.2014

prayed poetry

He didn't read the poems so much as he prayed them.

11.04.2014

gender gerrymandering

Remember that time you picked up an anthology and three-quarters of the poets included were women. No, because it didn’t happen. It’s either a 100% women, as in a specifically woman-centric antholology, or it’s well under 50% women.

11.03.2014

category error

All the better because it wouldn’t be a poem.

11.02.2014

candid kind

Last night we had the Nineteenth Wallace Stevens Birthday Bash at the Hartford Public Library. The guest speaker was Maureen N. McLane and she gave a wonderful talk. One of the poems featured in her talk was section III from "Notes toward a Supreme Fiction." An excerpt:

     The poem refreshes life so that we share,
     For a moment, the first idea . . . It satisfies
     Belief in an immaculate beginning

     And sends us, winged by an unconscious will,
     To an immaculate end. We move between these points:
     From that ever-early candor to its late plural

     And the candor of them is the strong exhilaration
     Of what we feel from what we think, of thought
     Beating in the heart, as if blood newly came,

     An elixir, an excitation, a pure power.
     The poem, through candor, brings back a power again
     That gives a candid kind to everything.

10.30.2014

unprejudiced observation

[Bϋchner] believed that the poet must strive to imitate reality, instead of improving upon and thereby distorting it, as do idealistic poets, who create mere puppets devoid of life. The individual, no matter how insignificant or unattractive, must take precedence over philosophical abstractions.
[…]
Bϋchner’s concept of beauty appears to be based upon unaffected sincerity among human beings and upon a Goethean perception of nature as an endless metamorphosis of forms and images that art can never fully capture nor transmit. Unprejudiced observation, he insists, leaves one open to an infinity of sensory impressions and human truths.

—Georg Bϋchner, “Bϋchner on Aesthetics,” Woyzeck and other Writings (Suhrkamp/Insel Publishers, 1982), edited by Henry J. Schmidt

10.29.2014

teaching moment

In its reading the poem enacts a heuristic.

10.28.2014

presidential library

Visiting Mt. Vernon last Sunday, the tour guide was heard to say that George Washington’s library was filled with books on science, military history, and poetry.

10.27.2014

defiant end

When a poem defies an ending it’s perhaps finished.

10.24.2014

organizing principle

He would spend many hours arranging each poem within a book, but a collected poems by convention is just one book after another in chronological sequence.

10.23.2014

language x-ray

To view poetry as the skeleton of prose.

10.22.2014

occupational disease

And we must at all costs avoid over-simplification, which one might be tempted to call the occupational disease of philosophers if it were not their occupation.

—J. L. Austin, How To Do Things With Words (Harvard U. Press, 1962)

And we must at all costs avoid over-elaboration, which one might be tempted to call the occupational disease of poets if it were not their occupation.

10.21.2014

parasite adjectives

There are many dangerous adjectives, being naturally parasitic of certain nouns.

10.20.2014

stop sign

In order not to fear the period, the writer must think of it as a way station or jumping off place.

10.16.2014

not domesticated

She respected words, treating them like they were wild animals.

10.14.2014

essential reins

Imagination, like wild horses, pulls hard and fast under the reins of reality.

10.13.2014

elder influence

Influence follows, but seldom comes from those who came after.

10.12.2014

sound architecture

One very often finds that in a Moore poem every phrase is load-bearing. This is sound architecture, the weight brilliantly distributed.

—Maureen N. McLane, “My Marianne Moore,” My Poets (Farrar, Straus & Giroux, 2012)

10.08.2014

hidden in the negative space

All the words and passages cut away from the poem form a shadow poem that seems to stalk the final draft.

10.05.2014

intermittent narrator

The journal is only the form of memoir I can abide, being piecemeal, fragmentary, sequential only in fits & starts, like life.

10.03.2014

low bar

The only writer I ever knew who actually washed out of his MFA.

10.01.2014

lesser editions

Book collectors seek nearly unread first editions. I love finding a dog-eared, beaten, heavily marked edition. I know then I’m in good company.

9.30.2014

poetry's province

Poetry claims all texts not immediately recognized as such.

9.29.2014

strong pair

Compound words: The power of coupled words that rivals metaphor.

9.26.2014

poet within the poet

What is probably new and startling in the work of Dylan Thomas is that, in dragging into light his versions of “the hidden causes” which he mentions, he has given an articulate voice to other parts of the body than the romantic heart—to the glands and the nerves, that is—and has, in considerable measure, freed them from the poetically sterile reason.
[…]
Although he is suitably interested in most phases of life, his impulse comes primarily from within his own body. He is the poet within the poet, and is generally dependent upon no externalities for his subject. This, then, I would say, is one of his main contributions to poetry: he has given voices and eyes to the part of the being which had formerly been dumb and blind; he has given the body a poetic aura…

—Henry Treece, Dylan Thomas: Dog Among the Fairies (Lindsay Drummond Ltd., 1949)

9.25.2014

pace coleridge

Available words in the only possible order that would be a poem.

9.24.2014

pristine copy

I saw an inscribed copy of your book at the Goodwill. It was in excellent (likely unread) condition, I must say.

9.23.2014

bird nest

She built her poem as a bird builds its nest, with strands of this & that found at large in the world.

9.21.2014

32 feet per second per second

Are the gaps in the poem capable of being bridged by the mind or are they meant to be moments of mental free fall?

9.20.2014

recycled crit

The kind of criticism that recycles familiar quotes and formulaic clichés of poetics, and thus uncovers nothing original, gives us nothing from which to learn.

9.17.2014

one conversation

     Much has the human experienced.
     Named many of the heavenly ones,
     Since we have been a conversation
     And can hear from one another.*

From these verses, let us first select one that immediately fits into the context so far: “Since we have been a conversation…” We—human beings—are a conversation. Human Being is grounded in language; but first properly occurs in conversation. This, however, is just one way in which language takes place; language is only essential as conversation.
[…]
Yet Hölderlin says: “Since we have been a conversation and can hear from one another.” Being able to hear is not merely a consequence of speaking with one another, but is instead the condition for this. Even being able to hear is itself in turn based upon the possibility of the word, and needs it. Being able to talk and being able to hear are equally originary. We are a conversation—and that means we are able to hear from one another. We are a conversation, and that also always means: We are one conversation.

—Martin Heidegger, “Hölderlin and the Essence of Poetry,” Heidegger Reader (Indiana University Press, 2009)

*lines from an unfinished poem by Hölderlin

9.16.2014

9.13.2014

less is more

A perfect short poem that could‘ve been written on the lint from one’s pocket.

9.10.2014

no mean feat

Capable poets all struggling to be consequential.

9.08.2014

gods gone to ground

The more you know of the masters the less you are impressed.

9.07.2014

amoebic ambit

With an amoebic ambit, my love of art is capacious, not being one who draws or respects lines as boundaries.

9.06.2014

to fill the silence

Many individual voices rise again in the dusk. Yeats dead, Pound silenced, Eliot lost to the theatre, Thomas gone before his time—it is the hour of the twittering machines. We listen to them as we drink our martinis or smoke a cigarette, and for an hour or two we feel content. Then the night comes and there is no voice to fill the silence. That is not as used to be. Poetry used to be in speech, in transaction, in worship; at the banquet, before the battle, in the moment of birth and burial. Why is poetry no longer our daily bread? We have to search for an answer to this question, and the search leads us to the foundations of our society. We have the poetry we deserve, just as we have the painting we deserve, the music we deserve; and if it is fragmented, personal, spasmodic, we have only to look around us to see the satanic chaos through which nevertheless a few voices have penetrated. The voices are pitched high and may sometimes sound discordant; but the image they convey has crystalline brightness and hardness, and cannot be shrouded.

—Herbert Read, “The Image in Modern English Poetry,” The Tenth Muse (Horizon Press, 1957)

9.05.2014

desperate apotheosis

The apotheosis of Romantic poetry came after the age was over in the form of Dylan Thomas. An apotheosis is often that desperate late flowering.

9.04.2014

it's like uhmm

Aspire to a style that can’t be adequately described.

9.03.2014

somehow fits

Somehow a poem makes human experience conform to the meager means of the word.

9.02.2014

stream of story and theme

The same stories and themes follow us because we as a society are constantly breaking camp and moving on.

9.01.2014

locked in line

If you can relax your mind, you’ll find that line.

8.30.2014

both philatelist and pirate

He wrote his poems against the gravity of language. Images, therefore, speak in his poetry solely on his behalf.

[…]

He was almost a philatelist with words. (He saw, long before we did, the fact that the boundaries of language are the boundaries of the world.)

[…]

A man of the Golden Age. “Poeta pirata est,” he would say?

From “Oktay Rifat

—Ilhan Berk, Selected Poems by Ilhan Berk (Talisman House, 2004), edited and translation by Önder Otçu.

8.29.2014

image for the ages

The underside of any good image is an archetype.

8.28.2014

unfortunate pub date

His book was released in the fall of 2001, while the world was otherwise occupied.

8.27.2014

more than was asked

A poet who had smart answers to even the daft questions posed by the interviewer.

8.26.2014

meditation train

However discursive/recursive, a meditation must retain its momentum.

under the hull

Reading a beautiful but obscure poem, like gliding over a shimmery surface trying to read the weeds swaying in the currents below.